Anyone interested in test driving my action adventure reader magnet?

This is my reader magnet for the adventure / thriller stories I am writing, about 8800 words. I’m pleased with where things have landed and would love to have someone who likes this kind of story read it. I’ve done about as much as I can do and will be submitting it for a copy edit soon.

Title: “Through the Gap”
Pitch:

Who rescues the rescuer?
Piper and her partner are deep in Pisgah National Forest for their wilderness rescue certification.

Find the victim. Get him out.
Simple…until it isn’t.

Through the gap and get help—that’s all she has to do.

If only it were that simple.

I like the questions that @Jake Leenerts used, so without permission I’ll steal them :-)

1. What did you like?

2. What confused you?

3. What bored you?

4. What pulled you out of the story?

For any who can help, you can add comments to this thread or the google doc:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lfvybTRt6jinu4GV9PVEBcB_NY7m6r6v008xVhNA_88