Dystopian back cover copy feedback
Working on the back cover of my book (and slightly terrified because I’m realizing this needs to be given to my designer within a week, and then it will be on a book, and I can’t change it… Unlike my Amazon and website copy). Would love any feedback!
Title: Unbanded
Genre: YA dystopian
Back cover:
I shouldn’t be alive.
Members of the Unbanded rebels did something to my mind before I was rescued. At least, that's what they told me when I woke up.
My brother says I’m safe now. My handlers say they are helping me.
They all say I should trust the band on my arm and the basan in my veins. Should trust the warm feeling of safety in my chest.
But they forgot that I’m not a helpless girl. That I was on a mission.
That the mission isn’t complete—and the mission holds answers.
Answers about who I am. About the bands we all wear. About the rebels’ plan to turn them against us.
Despite what I feel, I’m not safe.
Something is deadly wrong.
And I’m going to find out what it is.