Input on logline
Hi! I’m looking for opinions on my novel’s logline:
A one-armed innkeeper is resigned to failure until a stranger needs him to guide his journey, help rescue his bride, and save the land from enveloping evil.
Does this say what it ought to? Should I mention the genre (epic fantasy)? What is appealing or unappealing? Words I should change?
Working title is: Return to Delakoloria.
All opinions appreciated!