Using the advice from Thomas' last post.

So, I rewrote a rough blurb (arguably one of my weakest points) using the advice from Thomas' post. What are your thoughts?

At the tender age of four, Gabriella witnessed her mother's savage murder, which set her on a twelve-year journey to master self-defense to keep history from repeating itself. Yet, as her safety measures are systematically torn apart one after another and her unidentified attackers don't take collateral damage into consideration, she decides to go on the run. The recurring sight of a mysterious brown pickup, herald of danger and death, leaves her with a dire choice: continue to run or confront the threat to safeguard her remaining loved ones. Her decision to confront the nameless atrackers plays into the hand of a invisible human trafficking syndicate that measures human life in mere dollars.