Feedback for Kickstarter Page

Hello everyone!

As you know, I’m planning to run a Kickstarter for my debut novel. This will be the first time I have done such a thing, and I’m looking for some feedback on my page. Please find the preview link below. Note: I have received feedback on my cover in another post, and will be revising the images featuring the cover when the new artwork is finished.

https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/alexrussowrites/1574578928?ref=62c4q6&token=5595e522

@Josiah DeGraaf @Thomas Umstattd Jr. @Jonathan Shuerger @Peter DeHaan @Emily-Kate Crnko @Joanna K. Harris @Sarah Lillian Friedl @Rachel Keith @Joel Crumbley @Raymond Keith @L. J. Long @J.P. Choquette

P.S. Please don’t feed this link into an AI for advice on how to improve it. I’d like to keep the IP relatively secure until the Kickstarter goes live, and would like advice and feedback from others on what they’d want to see in a campaign.