Feedback on book trailer before it goes live?

I wasn’t going to release a book trailer for my second book, Inheritance, which published May 13. As Thomas says, book trailers don’t sell books.

But seeing how another writer’s video drew folks to her book table at a live event- I broke down and spent the $$$. Besides, trailers are so much FUN 🙂

So- before it goes live- I’d love any feedback. Here it is: