Feedback on my About Me Bio

This is the Short Version. I’m still working on the longer version.

Rachel Rohde has been working in childcare for over 7 years. Her playful spirit and creativity made for easy interactions with children. But she had a dream — a dream to become a published children’s author so after years of working in daycares, she quit her job and took a break to pursue writing school. Life and self-doubt soon took the driver’s seat and her dream took a backseat as she settled into a new job at yet another daycare. But the dream wouldn't die! And now she's working towards her dream!