One-sheet Comments Appreciated

My earlier post wasn’t working so here’s another shot at it.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1RyerQUQL5ucFC2oKT7EaxrloYJymVFMW/view?usp=drivesdk

This is the first time I’ve made one and I’m not sure if I’ve hit all the bases. My subscribers are few, so I didn’t include that information.