Pitch Non-Fiction

Just listened to How to Craft a Compelling Pitch. Here is my pitch for a book I’m relaunching, plus a second pitch for the companion Bible study. Let me know what you think of the two pitches below. Thanks in advance.

Clothed in Righteousness is a unique book that weaves together the importance of understanding your identity in Christ along with a balanced biblical view of how Satan operates.

Second pitch for companion Bible study (Clothed in Righteousness Devotional Study Guide) using the “What if” model.

What if you could become all that God created you to be?