Would love feedback on my Kickstarter Draft Page for my true crime book (totally Thomas' fault th...

Hi folks. I would appreciate any feedback on my draft-stage Kickstarter page, as many of you seem to be very familiar with the platform and what does and doesn’t work for authors. I blame Thomas and Joanna Penn for their enthusiastic endorsements of KS for getting me to this point 😂 Thank you in advance to anyone who can spare the time 🫶

https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/carlaconti/725931525?ref=72cgbq&token=a2796532