Homework #7: Marketing Copy - Keven

I’ve included below 3 versions of the Back Cover Copy for my book, Kingdom in the Redwoods. Thank you so much for any feedback and critique!

Version 1: (Pre-course version - I’m slightly embarrassed to share this version, but here goes)

o   Kingdom in the Redwoods is a fast-moving adventure transporting readers to not one, but two, captivating worlds where they’ll join the amazing journey of Aaron, Benji, and Hannah as they’re tested in ways they never imagined. Kingdom delivers a feast of fun, light, and hope, while exploring goodness, beauty, and truth in a chaotic world. Kingdom illuminates our King and His victory over the world, while inviting readers to explore what it means to be made in the image of the King, how to find their purpose in life, and how to live confidently, courageously, and with peace of mind.

Version 2: (Post- Marketing Copy Course version I)

o   What if you discover a kingdom overflowing with goodness and beauty? What if an evil enemy wants to destroy it all? And what if the King asks you to risk everything to save his kingdom?

 o   Join Aaron as he journeys into two amazing worlds, determined to get the answer to his most pressing question. Who am I? But first, he must overcome his greatest obstacle. Himself. To do that, he must discover the hero inside him.

Version 3: (Post - Marketing Copy Course version II)

o   What if a King asks you to risk everything to save his kingdom? Would you do it? 12-year-old Aaron’s dad is missing, but spending Christmas break at his grandparents’ ranch in the snow-covered mountains eases the sting. This is no ordinary ranch; it’s shrouded in mystery and fraught with peril.

o   Aaron embarks on an adventure, determined to find the answer to his most pressing question: Who am I? But first, he must save a kingdom and survive. To do that, he must discover the hero inside him.