Writing Great Copy HW #7

I don’t have a newsletter to edit but I do have some ideas for what I want to include:

Section 1:  Playground Wisdom for Parents - This section is for parenting skills with personal stories weaved in. 

Section 2: Ask Little Gator - This section is for answering emails from subscribers

Section 3: Share Your Wins - Subscribers write in and share what has gone well

Write or rewrite your back cover copy using what you’ve learned.

This is the original that was on the live meeting on Day 7 - @James L. Rubart

Little Gator’s Morning Dash dashes away all doubts on how to start the perfect day. By incorporating Little Gator’s Morning Dash into your child's daily routine, you will help your child develop confidence and enthusiasm as they master each of the 5 steps. 

Positive daily routines are an important part of developing a strong sense of self. Your child’s emotional health will flourish as they learn to appreciate the rewards of a job well done. 

This is the rewrite:

Raise your hand if you struggle with getting your children up and going in the morning. 

You are not alone. 

It might not be the oldest question ever but it's got to be close. How can parents turn morning hysteria into a seamless routine? 

The answer is, Little Gator’s Morning Dash. 

With charm and wit, Little Gator dashes through five easy to follow steps that even toddlers will want to try on their own.  

What will children gain? Independence and confidence.  

What will  parents gain? Smoother mornings and happier children. 

What could be better than that? 

For more information about Little Gator Books, please visit:

littlegatorbooks.com

Write out five to ten possible headlines for your website.

1 How Would You Like to Have Less Family Stress & More Family Joy

2 Snappy News from the Swamp

3 Are you Ready to Help Your Family Have an Amazing Day?

4 You Are Amazing - Let me Help You Be Even Better 

5. Let Little Gator Take the Bite out of Your Morning Chaos

6. Do Your Mornings Feel Like You Are Wading Through A Swamp

7. STOP What You Are Doing and Join the Little Gator Movement

8. Are You Ready to Tackle Life One Bite At a Time 

9.  Change Your Life with 5 Simple Steps

10. Are You Ready to Empower Your Children And Bring Joy To Your Day

Take your existing copy on one to two of your website pages and rewrite them. What did you change? What did you discover?

My website is still under construction

This is my current bio

Sheri and her husband Jim (aka Gator) are the parents of 5 children and the grandparents of 7. She and her husband spend their time enjoying their family and snuggling grandbabies. 

As a former school teacher, Sheri uses her passion for inspiring children in her work as a marriage and family therapist and author.

As a marriage and family therapist, Sheri specializes in helping children regulate their emotions and experience a sense of accomplishment in completing age appropriate activities. It is from her work with children that the Little Gator books were born.

This is a rewrite to make it shorter: 

Sheri Morris is a marriage and family therapist who understands first hand how hard mornings with young children can be. She and her husband Jim raised five rambunctious children of their own and even through the struggles would do it again in a heartbeat 

Or because my degree is listed on the previous page:

Sheri Morris has years of professional and personal experience and understands first hand how hard mornings with young children can be. She and her husband Jim raised five rambunctious children of their own and even through the struggles would do it again in a heartbeat