Reader Magnet Feedback

Would anyone be interested in giving some feedback on my reader magnet? It’s a not quite 18000 word (urban) fantasy novella. I would be happy to provide feedback on your writing in return. My general target audience is people who like books like Dungeon Crawler Carl, The Will of the Many, Project Hail Mary, Red Rising etc.

Blurb:

Over the years Luke has gotten good at dodging falling pianos. Unfortunately, his car hasn’t had the same kind of training. With his flight to his estranged sister’s wedding cancelled due to one of the aeroplane wings falling off, he convinces his co-worker, who is moving across the country, to drive him to the wedding. It’s in the same direction after all.  A week in a small, filled-to-bursting car with a guy he’s never spoken two words to before that day? What could possibly go wrong?

Luke has always had a sneaking suspicion the universe is trying to kill him. His family insist falling pianos, random wildlife attacks and freak weather patterns are all totally normal. They happen to everyone. But they’ve been hiding the truth. He was right. The universe wants him dead; just like it’s wanted the first born from every generation of his family dead for the last 200 years. As the collateral damage piles up around him, he realises his only choice is to do what his family couldn’t – find a way to break the curse. Or die trying.