Feedback on Book Trailer #2

Any advice you have on my second book trailer (RELEASE DATE SEPT 19 AAAAAA) would be DEEPLY appreciated. It’s not perfect by a long stretch, but wondered if there was some actionable feedback anyone could give me.

EDIT: For anyone who provided feedback if you would like to see the changes I made based on all your feedback, here is the final version (so far— I will probably not release this until Sept 19!):