Website critique, please? :)

I’ve been sprucing up my website for my Christian middle-grade epic animal fantasy series for a while, and would like some opinions on it! Here’s my site: https://rachelkeithbooks.com/

Basically, I’d like to know:

• Is the series’ About section intriguing?

• Is my bio section all right?

• Since I don’t have a shop yet (mere months away from 18 and legally being able to get one arghhh!!), I have merch listed in a Shop section and have it connected to the series GoFundMe—do y’all think it works smoothly and looks nice?

• If y’all spot anything else you think could improve, let me know! Thanks :)