Back Cover Blurb Help

Hey all, I’d love some feedback on my back cover blurb. They are my weakness. Thank you in advance!

Dan

Here’s the blurb:

A city bathed in neon glow.

A bad cop trying to do right.

A crime boss vying with corporations to stake his claim on the city.

 Kansas City is in trouble. Seeds McGee is out of jail, buying up the riverfront and installing shipping and gambling businesses. The river is almost his, but when a dead man shows up a few blocks from one of his properties, is it an indication he’s back at the game of murder too? Or is someone coming for him?

The Conglomerate is on the move as well. Once a megacorp farm trust, its board is tired of feeding the city. Now it wants to own it too. Unlike Seeds McGee, the Conglomerate is open about its mission. The people welcome CON with open arms, but something – or someone – is messing with their grain shipments.

Kansas City is about to blow up…unless Detective Nate Perkins can solve the case in time. It’ll take more than fancy implants and DNA evidence though. Seeds McGee has DNA unzippers in his teeth and auditory scramblers in his brain. It’ll take real, old-fashioned police work. Problem is, Nate hasn’t been a decent cop in over a decade. Not since he put Seeds McGee away the first time.