Which Pitch?
Does anyone care to cast a vote? (Genre: Women’s Christian Fiction)
Which (if any) make you want to read more? And for C and D, does it read better with Step 1 or Step One?
A. TO DANCE WITHOUT A PARTNER -- a story of ballroom dance, infidelity, and 70 weeks of prayer. (17 words)
B. Small town ballroom dance teacher + cheating husband + praying friends + 70 weeks = a whole new dance. (19 words)
C. Ballroom teacher RACHEL stumbles into a whole new dance when she finds her husband cheating. Step 1: Rally praying friends. Step 2: Wait 70 weeks. Step 3? God only knows. (30 words)
D. How’s this for a new dance? Step One: Discover cheating husband. Step Two: Rally praying friends. Step Three: Wait 70 weeks. Not the dance ballroom teacher RACHEL signed up for. (30 words)
E: Your idea here : )